First Draft Of Our Music Video

This is a first draft of mine and Julius music video. We still need to make a lot of changes and add more footage as there are black spaces. We kept the spaces blank because we need to add more performances and film the rest of the narrative. We do have a problem with the performance as we need to include more but its hard as most of the time goes towards the narrative and if we miss out some narrative or cut it short, it won’t really make sense. We posted it on YouTube to show the whole class so we can get feedback in how to improve and things we may need to change. One of the feedbacks we got was to remove the cancer letter at the end and leave it a mystery to the audience how she died and what the letter was about. It makes it more interesting if we let the audience come up with how she died and it will make people talk about the video and make it more popular if it’s a mystery.